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    "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Tue Dec 17, 2013 5:27 pm

    To make sure the thread with the actual story doesn't get interrupted by comments, please post your comments here.

    I'll post an update on this thread whenever I upload a chapter of "Fourteen Times in Perim" in the Fanfiction section.
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Tue Dec 17, 2013 5:42 pm

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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Wed Dec 18, 2013 8:10 pm

    I want some more. Looks like I shall cheat to the fan fiction site.
    Oh, and as a side note. You should have the link for this thread at the end of every chapter you post here. Because I almost replied there until I saw the note at the end.

    Although I don't feel like reading this... It feels too similar... Too close for comfort. This feels like something i might have written. It's too scary, but i can't stop, it's so interesting I must keep reading. This is the type of thing I live for.


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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Thu Dec 19, 2013 2:46 pm

    As I read on, I'm disliking your use of bold.


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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Thu Dec 19, 2013 9:27 pm

    What should I use instead of bold?
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Thu Dec 19, 2013 10:33 pm

    You should technically be using italics. But I feel you just stress too many words.

    This story is really amazing. I love your writing style. I literally have spent my entire day (~7 hours) reading this, and I'm only up to 38. Once again, amazing.


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    Post by quazer flame on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:12 pm

    Wow, 7 hours straight or 7 hours total?
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    Post by Marrillian on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:15 pm

    If you don't count a meal, snacks, and bathroom breaks... you can call it straight. But its ~7 hours total.


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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:43 pm

    Wow.

    Chapter 38? So, you've met Frank then.
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    Post by Marrillian on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:48 pm

    Arg... Indeed I have.


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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Terabyte on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:52 pm

    I still haven't read past 65, but I like to just read and read and read. I was working on Game of Thrones before I found your story. Seriously, if you publish something, tell me so I can buy an autographed copy...
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    Post by Marrillian on Thu Dec 19, 2013 11:54 pm

    I would do the exact same^ You are an inspiration to me. Although I have been wanting to get back to writing anyway XD


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    Post by Terabyte on Fri Dec 20, 2013 12:03 am

    I feel like I'm a good writer, I just lack the inspiration to start. I had fun writing the fan fic I was working on. Don't know if it was quality, but I find it enjoyable. Just not worth the effort when I have other recreational activities.
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    Post by Marrillian on Fri Dec 20, 2013 12:11 am

    You should post and see. But I know how you feel, there are so many other activities. If I have a fan-base, I am so much more eager to write or do other activities. I think I might post The Monkey on fanfiction. But keep the original as a here exclusive Wink (Might get some more traffic hehe)


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    Post by quazer flame on Fri Dec 20, 2013 4:10 pm

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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Terabyte on Sat Dec 21, 2013 7:06 pm

    I'm up to chapter 77. It's been slow moving. Like I said, too many other things I want to do during my break that I'm just sitting around and not doing any of them out of fear of the regret of doing another...My mind is not the simplest of them all. Anyway...
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    Post by Marrillian on Sat Dec 21, 2013 8:59 pm

    Yea, I have had to limit myself as well, since going two days of sitting and reading (non-school related material) is pretty bad XD


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    Post by Terabyte on Sat Dec 21, 2013 11:43 pm

    But it's so good. I get so many feels. I care about the bad guys because they're just misunderstood. I get a tad nauseous as I read some sections about glowing stuff...I can't look at you the same, King...
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Sun Dec 22, 2013 12:31 am

    Think how I feel whenever I look at Marrillian's avatar, Terabyte. -_-
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    Post by Terabyte on Sun Dec 22, 2013 12:35 am

    My condolences. I'm at 89 right now.
    And you can call me Tera if it's easier.
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:03 pm

    Oh um... would it be better for it to be changed then? only on 38. Bakuman has grabbed my immediate attention. (I've been alternating.)


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    Post by Terabyte on Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:53 pm

    Bakuman is good too...But that's an Anime discussion, not for Fanfic.
    You should just choose one and finish it. I wish I could, but I get sidetracked as well and waver between my many choices.
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Sun Dec 22, 2013 10:05 pm

    Nah. It's really the mood I'm in. Anyway now that other people are on this that I'll start commenting more.


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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by quazer flame on Mon Dec 23, 2013 12:34 am

    @Marrillian wrote:Oh um... would it be better for it to be changed then? only on 38. Bakuman has grabbed my immediate attention. (I've been alternating.)

    Uh, where did that comment come from? Seems kinds of random.
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    Re: "Fourteen Times in Perim" Comment Thread.

    Post by Marrillian on Mon Dec 23, 2013 1:24 pm

    Opes, I should have included a quote, you guys were complaining about my Au'une avatar XD


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