Chaotic Set: Underworld Conquest

I made this concept a while back and have decided to post the cards I made for it. The storyline of the set is that Chaor and Van Bloot, on a shaky alliance, declare war on the Overworld and begin invading its territories. The loser of this war would have a tribe in shambles...

Ultras:

Chaor, The Flame Heart
Creature-Underworld Conqueror Warrior
Element(s): Fire
Courage: 95
Power: 100
Wisdom: 70
Speed: 55
Energy: 70
Mugic Counters: 0
Expend fire while engaged: Deal 15 damage to target creature.
Whenever a creature your opponent controls is healed or gains energy, Chaor gains fire.
Unique, Loyal

Lord Van Bloot, Reaper of Courage
Creature-Underworld Conqueror Muge
Element(s): Earth
Courage: 50
Power: 45
Wisdom: 85
Speed: 70
Energy: 55
Mugic Counters: 2
Whenever a creature engaged with Lord Van Bloot loses courage, Lord Van Bloot gains 5 energy.
Unique, Loyal

*Chaor and Van Bloot have polarized abilities. Chaor attempts to burn all of the opposition while Van Bloot mercilessly crushes his single opponent.

Fir-Farth
Creature-Underworld Ethereal
Element(s): Fire
Courage: 55
Power: 70
Wisdom: 30
Speed: 45
Energy: 50
Mugic Counters:1
1MC: Target creature gains 15 energy and,"Recklesness 5."
When a creature you control deals 30 or more damage with a fire attack, Fir-Farth gains 1MC


Tarrlogg, Slayer of the Strong
Creature-Underworld Scout
Element(s): Earth
Courage: 45
Power: 35
Wisdom: 60
Speed: 75
Energy: 20
Mugic Counters: 0
Tarrlogg cannot gain initiative.
Whenever Tarrlogg becomes engaged, the opposing engaged creature loses energy equal to its lowest discipline, but cannot lose energy below 5.
Unique

Supers:

Takinom, Chaor's Commando
Creature-Underworld Commander
Element(s): Fire, Air
Courage: 75
Power: 65
Wisdom: 40
Speed: 80
Energy: 55
Mugic Counters: 1
Whenever a creature deals 20 or more damage with an attack, it gains 5 energy.
Unique

Skithia, Van Bloot's Commando
Creature-Underworld Commander
Elements: Fire, Earth
Courage: 60
Power: 35
Wisdom: 70
Speed: 40
Energy: 30
Mugic Counters: 2
Other Underworld Creatures you control gain "Intimidate Courage: 30".
1MC: Deal 5 damage to target creature for each discipline it has below 30.

*Each commando was designed to support her leader.

Barrrath-Beyond, Forged Champion
Creature-Underworld Ethereal Warrior
Elements: Fire, Air
Courage: 50
Power: 50
Wisdom: 50
Speed: 50
Energy: 65
MC: 0
Whenever Barrrath-Beyond becomes engaged, flip a coin. If heads, Barrrath-Beyond gains fire 5 and air 5. If tails, Barrrath-Beyond gains 50 to all disciplines.

*Triple "r" to keep the trend going.

Kopond, Pyromuge
Creature-Underworld Muge
Elements: Fire
Courage: 50
Power: 65
Wisdom: 70
Speed: 35
Energy: 35
Mugic Counters: 2
1MC: Sacrifice another unengaged creature you control: Deal 20 to damage to target creature.
Unique

Darrabi, The Coal Burner
Creature-Underworld Taskmaster
Elements: Fire, Earth
Courage: 60
Power: 90
Wisdom: 30
Speed: 15
Energy: 70
Mugic Counters: 0
Defender
Recklessness 5
Sacrifice a battlegear equipped to Darrabi: Deal 10 damage to target engaged creature.

Spyder
Creature-Underworld Scout
Elements: Fire
Courage: 30
Power: 55
Wisdom: 55
Speed: 70
Energy: 50
Mugic Counters: 0
Creatures engaged with Spyder cannot cast mugic or use activated abilities.
Unique

Juxlax, Tactician of Insanity
Creature-Underworld Commander
Elements: None
Courage: 30
Power: 15
Wisdom: 95
Speed: 45
Energy: 25
Mugic Counters: 1
At the beginning of each action step, swap the locations of 2 random creatures.
Unique

Barrlix
Creature-Taskmaster Warrior
Elements: None
Courage: 65
Power: 110
Wisdom: 10
Speed: 25
Energy: 65
Mugic Counters: 0
Outperform Power 10
Intimidate Power 30
Recklessness 10

*Well, someone had to get the short end of the straw. He works well with Akkilbi though.

More to come.

Well, here's my 2 cents.

Chaor is just a bit too OP, I could maybe see 15 damage.

Van Bloot is extremely OP. Reducing it to 5 energy each time would probably be the only way that is reasonable. With his Scythe, he would be gaining, what? 10-15 energy each time? Not balanced.

Fir-Farth is a Firemorpher, kinda cool. The fact that he plays like Carnivore's Keening means he's going to be extremely meta in UW decks in order that those decks have burn protection. Even though it would be very meta, I don't see it being to powerful to call unbalanced.

Tarrlogg is simply broken. The ability is very unique as well, so I can't really say how you can nerf it to be acceptable, it will take some proactive adjustment. He's also missing Energy value, but even if hes 20 energy he could be 2-shotting Heptadds, etc, which probably isn't safe for the game.

Takinom is balanced, a little out of character because usually shes dealing extra damage, but balanced. She's also missing an energy value.

Skithia's first ability is a little over-powered just because of LVB SOA/Galmedar. I do understand it works very well with your LVB so I won't say to change it. Her second ability is actually a little underpowered, may want to taking away a bit from her first and giving a little more umff for that second ability.

Barrath is Balanced.

Kopond is missing a value, but due to the sacrifice mechanic he is probably balanced.

Darrabi is cool. UW could use a defender.

Spyder is balanced. Could definitely see him in meta when paired with a Bimowercycle.

Juxlax is interesting. Could definitely see him being used in a Prexxor Chasm sort of deck.

Barrlix is balanced. Missing an Elements note, but I'd assume he'd have none, or maybe air.

Thanks for the feedback Blvz! I already adjusted most of the cards. Tarrlogg never goes first in combat, which makes me think that he isn't bonkers (could be wrong...probably am).

ziro207 wrote:Tarrlogg never goes first in combat, which makes me think that he isn't bonkers (could be wrong...probably am).

You have to consider though, that since this ability takes place when you enter combat you can easily use burn to finish the other creature off. Ulmar PR would be an easy 10 damage for you to just 1 shot someone.

And then there's combos like Dread Tread or Shinadd that could make the ability even worse.

Maybe if Tarrlogg's ability was something like "When Tarrlogg becomes engaged, opposing engaged creatures lose energy to equal its lowest stat, but cannot be reduced below 5." 

Right now you're punishing people for having high disciplines, which is pretty strange. The only other card that comes to my mind for doing that is Tarterek Psi. But he has a different feel. 

I'm not sure if my suggestion would ruin the feel you were trying to achieve for Tarrlogg though. I think it goes more with the UW theme of destroying those who are weak?